Hi Riku, thank you for reading and for the feedback! With this poem, I wanted to express the idea that perhaps sometimes the realization of something we were previously unaware of can lead us to feeling trapped and even lost. I completely agree with your critique though — I think I spent all my attention on the message I w…
That is what “Truth” actually is, it leaves you stranded with only so much. It makes you feel a lot of distress & people around you wouldn’t conform to your choices and ways. You might feel lost, but the best measure always is to keep taking chances, and also giving them to both yourself and others because time does tell, if you persevere. I know the feeling of losing everything, in almost every scenario 😆i can think of, i hope that truths don’t come my way because I have understand that one reference, “you want the truth, you can’t handle the truth” all too well to be frankly honest.
I believe sometimes it is better to be unaware about a few things. It’s better that way. There are some truths, they will destroy you. Knowledge comes at a cost, a cost that definitely takes away something you hold dear. But when there is a will there is a way, so when in life you are surrounded by doubt; just do it your way!
Stay Blessed, but most of all Have Fun! ❤