Ah, the unseen and the forsaken. I liked your prose really much. It shows a significant impact towards the idleness of one's soul giving up that wants freedom but their inner hopes are shattered. It feels like a plea of help, that the shattered hope is perhaps ruminating as the unseen from the forsaken.

Thank you for writing this vivid poem that shows how a simple connection can even entice the most melancholic of souls.

Stay Blessed and Stay Safe!

With Love

Riku

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I write about life, and the hope it bears in a poetic context. 💖🕊️

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